Feedback and Revision

Overall, the class did not have many negative things to say. Just some minor flaws like wind noise and poor font selection were mentioned. In one of the scenes, the wind was hitting the camera pretty hard and making undesirable background noise. We could fix this by silencing the scene a little. The font was not the default iMovie font like some said, but it looks slightly similar so we could change it.
Some positive remarks the class had for us were things like the good camera quality, clever shots, an good acting. The film was recorded with an iPhone, which they liked better than the real cameras. Our classmates liked the shot where Michael was pulling into the parking lot and the camera was focused on the binder. they also liked the shot where Mae was being dragged away because of the ground-level view and good acting.